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Post by markgunnells on Aug 28, 2010 7:47:32 GMT -6
I felt this digital short often gets lost in discussion of Knight's work, but I thought it was amazing. A great revenge story told by a master, and the structure of the piece I thought really worked. Not to give to much away, but he strategically switched from first person to third person and I thought it was highly effective.
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Post by Brian Knight on Aug 28, 2010 13:22:02 GMT -6
Some readers found it jarring, but some liked it. I thought it worked well, or I wouldn't have done it
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Post by markgunnells on Aug 28, 2010 13:26:37 GMT -6
I've read changes like that which were jarring--Christine anyone?--but I thought yours worked well because I thought there was a specific reason for it. But I don't want to get into that reason for folks who haven't read it.
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